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I haven't gone through the whole chapter, but noticed the following when filling in the skipped lines:


[Haruka said heartily.] Should be [Haruka said heartily, while putting on the glasses she had taken from her breast pocket.]

Perhaps this was left out for ease of reading? (or to spare Haruka the embarrassment? XD).

Further down the page, [Whoa! There are more than thirty!] should be [Whoa! There are more than twenty!]. Not really important though.

212.139.244.24 21:15, December 11, 2012 (UTC) A Fox Lost in the Garden

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